Talk:TPG Teradon Frigate

I'm curious now, User:Miharu says the old picture was grammatically incorrect, yet now the page is inconsistent, it shows ship in game that "Virtually nothing is known about." I hope somebody can fix that and give specific details on how the vessel is equiped, especially since we now know more about this vessel. --Pixelcat 10:13, 19 May 2006 (EDT)

Your *text* additions were grammatically incorrect. Those are what I fixed. :Miharu 15:17, 19 May 2006 (EDT)

You didn't fix my text addition, you reverted all of my additions, including adding the old tag, and then brought my new pictures back in your own edit, which is labeled "Rolled back--new version was grammatically incorrect; the previous was not." Since the only change in this edit was to bring back the new pictures, I assumed the old pic must have been "grammatically incorrect." Also, for future edits, what was grammatically incorrect about my changes and why is this article now fully up-to-date? --Pixelcat 23:20, 20 May 2006 (EDT)

Text issues: "Its size is between the size of the Trident Light Frigate and the size of the Heavy Assault Cruiser in size".

No person who has completed middle school english uses a phrase or word (in this case, "size" and "in size") as many times as you did in a single sentence. It's repetitive and it looks UGLY. Also, making things wordy for the sake of making them wordy is bad. Very bad. Simply put: the text was fine as it was and didn't need to be updated.

Regarding the "outdated" tag, there hasn't been any new information regarding the Teradon since it was brought into the game, therefore it *can't* be outdated. Information we get at this stage is unreliable because the Teradon is not in its final, releaseable to the players form. As for rolling back, then putting in the images... Rolling back, as far as I knew, only went back *one* edit. It went back through all of your edits, and the pictures were fine as they were, so I put them back. :Miharu 18:03, 21 May 2006 (EDT) Who came up with "BGTKWOA" and what does it stand for? --Phaserlight 13:51, 23 June 2006 (EDT)